2 April 2013

NaPoWriMo Poem 2


You Push Your Hands

You push your hands
push your hands into the
wild inconsistency
of water
and the water takes you
with the generosity of ocean
making your cadences its own.



Sally Douglas


This came from the same prompt as yesterday's poem - a couple of words took me in a different direction. Not sure about the title, but I don't want to pin the poem down so it seemed the best option.


1 comment:

  1. I love the notion of pushing my hands into the wild inconsistency of water

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